A nice watch and a comedic idea. The whimsical animation is great. The effort shown is great in amount and obviously shown with your stablilty to show texture with humor in your work. Having RicePirate is a good add as well. I am a little effervescent with the lack of dialogue and although it clearly works fine without it, there would be a new layer of humor and a new feeling to the cartoon.

Nice job, I think you will pass this round in NATA and should get the prize is you start producing more even better material.

Good Start

You have put a lot of strong effort in this flash I see.

I for one say that this was a great idea for a flash, and I can't wait for the series.

You might have to work on animation though for this flash to be respected by most users, some dipshits just get turned off by the animation and don't watch it.

Great job!

7/10 4/5

It is a little confusing....

A certain percentage of the class will instantly sieze on this as their favorite comic in the flash class

Lets just say work on your animation for one, the story is fine I guess

And how do you really control the game anyways? Thats what people want to know.

Sweet!

The design your level thing is awesome!

Another 2D Hack and Slash

The individual elements of the game initially seem passable, but in sum they make up a regressive, repetitive game that only functions as a way to kill your spare minutes through raw attrition. There's nothing epic to see here

The intensity simply builds and builds

The result is a happy souvenir, best experienced among 12,000 of your closest, Ecstacy-popping friends.

A great example of club music.

I'm not even a fan of house music but this song is a major exception.

Amazing!

I love it!
By the way could you make a re-make of "Everybody Else", I'd like you to make it better.
Also, search "Living Transparent" on the audio portal, maybe you could make a song out of that?

Amazing

I think you will be big in the art portal some day, in fact, I think you could do better!

Don't stop trying!

Dark Indeed

Very good, it just didn't give me the feeling that this is the best.
Keep it up!