Funny and clever. I would work on your animation style. It will improve in time. I like your original idea. Nice job making your own loader with the pen as well as adding in the funny easter eggs.
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Funny and clever. I would work on your animation style. It will improve in time. I like your original idea. Nice job making your own loader with the pen as well as adding in the funny easter eggs.
A nice watch and a comedic idea. The whimsical animation is great. The effort shown is great in amount and obviously shown with your stablilty to show texture with humor in your work. Having RicePirate is a good add as well. I am a little effervescent with the lack of dialogue and although it clearly works fine without it, there would be a new layer of humor and a new feeling to the cartoon.
Nice job, I think you will pass this round in NATA and should get the prize is you start producing more even better material.
Good Start
You have put a lot of strong effort in this flash I see.
I for one say that this was a great idea for a flash, and I can't wait for the series.
You might have to work on animation though for this flash to be respected by most users, some dipshits just get turned off by the animation and don't watch it.
Great job!
7/10 4/5
Well the wait will probably be longer than you'd like; even if I were to continue this story, it's not my highest priority. This was just an exercise in seeing what I could do as far as animation went. A lot of it was also rushed; everything before Vek gets hit by a truck was done within two very frantic months, and everything after that point was me doing it on top of looking for jobs and doing other stuff. But don't worry, the next thing I have planned is going to be more polished and better animated than this, for sure.
It is a little confusing....
A certain percentage of the class will instantly sieze on this as their favorite comic in the flash class
Lets just say work on your animation for one, the story is fine I guess
And how do you really control the game anyways? Thats what people want to know.
Sweet!
The design your level thing is awesome!
Another 2D Hack and Slash
The individual elements of the game initially seem passable, but in sum they make up a regressive, repetitive game that only functions as a way to kill your spare minutes through raw attrition. There's nothing epic to see here
The intensity simply builds and builds
The result is a happy souvenir, best experienced among 12,000 of your closest, Ecstacy-popping friends.
A great example of club music.
I'm not even a fan of house music but this song is a major exception.
:D I'm glad I was able to do something like that.
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Amazing!
I love it!
By the way could you make a re-make of "Everybody Else", I'd like you to make it better.
Also, search "Living Transparent" on the audio portal, maybe you could make a song out of that?
Yes, I definitely will remake Everybody Else very soon. Thanks :)
Amazing
I think you will be big in the art portal some day, in fact, I think you could do better!
Don't stop trying!
Thanks man! :)
Dark Indeed
Very good, it just didn't give me the feeling that this is the best.
Keep it up!
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